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Thursday, June 4, 2020
Hello & Goodbye Poem
We were learning about what we had to say hello to and goodbye to.
Hi Daniel!I am Ruby from Mangapapa School in Gisborne. I like how your sentences have lots of detail! Also I like how all of your sentences make sense. But maybe you shouldn't be gaming at 4.30! Also, what games do you like to play?
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Hi Daniel!I am Ruby from Mangapapa School in Gisborne. I like how your sentences have lots of detail! Also I like how all of your sentences make sense. But maybe you shouldn't be gaming at 4.30! Also, what games do you like to play?
ReplyDeleteThanks Ruby, to be honest I agree with you on the 4:30 thing lol. I play Fortnite, Roblox, Minecraft and some other games but I've forgotten.
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