Thursday, June 4, 2020

Hello & Goodbye Poem

We were learning about what we had to say hello to and goodbye to.
I found it easy to come up with ideas.
I really enjoyed...
Next time I need to improve...

2 comments:

  1. Hi Daniel!I am Ruby from Mangapapa School in Gisborne. I like how your sentences have lots of detail! Also I like how all of your sentences make sense. But maybe you shouldn't be gaming at 4.30! Also, what games do you like to play?

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    1. Thanks Ruby, to be honest I agree with you on the 4:30 thing lol. I play Fortnite, Roblox, Minecraft and some other games but I've forgotten.

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